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Docmaverick
United States
Submitted by docmaverick on 26 July 2007 - 1:00pm.
Style / Type:
Western Classic
When I was young I had cat-like moves,
was relentless, and had no fears;
now, all that identifies me with a cat,
is the hair growing out of my ears!
I’m old, and gray, and I’ve lost my strut,
I’m not quite what I used to be;
though I’ve mellowed with age, and my eyes have dimmed,
that isn’t what’s troubling me.
Now, I’m quite aware of my surroundings,
I know what side my bread’s buttered on;
I just can’t remember the total
of lives lost, before nine are gone!
I’ll tell you what finally consoles me,
even cursed with these patches of fur;
I know when I’m blessed by my Master,
and I still have my ability to purr!
(2 votes)

lives and whiskers
Your poem brought me forth such rich memories
of cats young and old
and rhetorical “cats” old cats fat cats
lean cats young cats
well versed and well written
“the total of lives lost, before
nine are gone…..”
well done !
yeah, this is tres cool
of course I am not objective because I love cats and am also “cursed with these patches of fur” but poetry has little room for objectivity.
Dug this and totally related
cheers,
Jess
This was so good that I read
This was so good that I read it to my four cats. Lucy, my calico, looked at me and winked! I swear it’s true, LOL! Good job on this one.
Always, Cat