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SAKKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN
India
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Submitted by SAKKTHEE RAVICH... on 25 July 2007 - 10:56pm.
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KISS ME
Kiss me dear to forget all my worries and
to overcome all my griefs of life
when you are nearing me to kiss,I feel
a tremendous feel blossoms in my mind
My eyeballs go to the sweet dark and
my lips get dried to quench the wine from…
Seconds moves slow as an year
The surrounding becomes dark and glare
Your face and lips only visible to me
I am flying,flying above on the heaven
Dear! please be there ,I will stay there for a long
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET
(1 vote)
I think you derive power
from using english when it is clearly your second language. This is so beautiful, ingenuous and lovely. I will never comment on your grammar, I even suspect you may use it that way on purpose. Even the last line, last word missing or leaving it forever? Cool
with respect,
Jess
THANKS
GIVE ME YOUR POSSITTIVE IDEAS TO COME UP AS WELL KNOWN POET
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS