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SAKKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN
India
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Submitted by SAKKTHEE RAVICH... on 23 July 2007 - 12:24am.
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LIFE
Will it continue? or
will it go to end?
Where is the starting point?
I can try to know but
My destined destination….?
A day may dawn with feasts and glee and
the next day may dawn reverse to that day before
Titles,car buildings will come up to…?
Girls, money and sex up to…..?
Tune your life to Him
Atleast to secure peace in death
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN
Sakkthee you know I really like your work.
But I abhore this one. You attempt the profound without offering anything new and the last line is the worst human cop-out possible. “At least secure peace in death” Oh, your work is usually so full of life, not this morbid compromise.
I can only be so cruel and harsh because I respect the rest of your work so much.
You usually do much better.
sorry,
Jess