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Submitted by Helene Olivia on 1 January 2009 - 10:39pm.| Updated 1 January 2009 - 9:44pm.
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Its all so beautifuly sad
This sweet life I’ve had
All those moments that still have such feeling
My remembering has grown old
Of long nights feeling lost cold
Days spent in bright sun felt like stealing
This harm that I do
Was never meant to be true
My love given was strong and undying
Yet hurt I have spun
From days lived in hot sun
So I sit here alone now and crying
How to love is the key
That can set us all free
To let go of our fears and start flying
Turn your face to the sun
It was all meant to be fun
My love given was strong and undying
Its all so beautifuly sad
That sweet life we had
something i wrote a few years ago , I reworked it slightly but let me know of any improvements you can think of
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I think it is a good poem
I think it is a good poem with good rhyming.
I am trying to imagine being beautifully sad.
In all my sadness in my life past and present I can’t imagine anything beautiful about it. Expect maybe the fact fact that I got through it and came out a better person,at least I would like to think so.
You have done the impossible in this fine write.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Respectfully
Yours,
Barbara
Beauty in sadness
Hello and thank you for your feedback. I was talking to someone one day about how sometimes you can feel sad and be fully in that feeling and see a kind of beauty in it , like when you are apart from someone you love and are missing them and in that sense of longing for them there is a kind of exquisite feeling, a beauty in the way you can feel so deeply for someone. Or perhaps I’m just a hopeless romantic!
Pleased to make your acquaintance ,
Helene Olivia
Helene
After reading your comment i can now imagine the emotion you describe here.
I can feel a sadness of a love one gone who will return. And then feeling love through sadness for that one. Is that close to you meaning?
Respectfully
Yours,
Barbara
i think that this is a
i think that this is a really good write for it is kind of ironic but it in my life it kinda describes true feelings