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SAKKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN
India
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Submitted by SAKKTHEE RAVICH... on 18 July 2007 - 1:09am.| Updated 18 July 2007 - 8:21am.
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Japanese
A Travel in a city bus [DELAY]
It is the time of nine morning
with a hurry and sweat i get in
It is already overflow with passengers
My inclusion adds more problem to others
there at the moment gives whistle to move
It slowly moves instead of running
stage by stage decrease and increase it’s tickets.
With a lot of patience i am waiting to reach my stage
at last it reached that stage as an achievement in its service
when i reached my office
there the clock strucks eleven
Sakthi Ravichandran indian english poet
it is the experience of mine in a city bus
maybe you should check your
maybe you should check your spelling before you post man, you seem to have a good command of the language, i’m assuming it’s your second?
SORRY I WILL CORRECT IT
DEAR SIR
SORRY TO THIS MISTAKE I WILL CORRECT IT AND I WILL SEE SUCH MISTAKES WILL NOT HAPPEN INFUTURE
Ravi:
Please don’t worry overmuch at this stage of your pennings over misspellings and mispunctuations … lest you inhibit your manner of writing.
To point a broader finger, people nowadays virtually anywhere in the U.S. are sorely lacking in those same skills. And most hold (American) English as their first (and only) language.
It’s OK to be careful, but don’t let overconcern about such details cramp your style, which is delightful.
In truth, I find your partly broken English unaccountably endearing.
Yours,
Grandpa