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Heartbeats echo over telephone lines

Innuendo crackles and sparks

Yearnings reflections seen through tinted glass

Faded visions of memories past

 

Every breath is meant for two

Every breath I breathe for you

Multifaceted gem

Count each facet then begin again

When I think I’ve no more to give

It’s then one word rings true

I’ll always have more to give anew

 

Finding it harder to stay away

Miss you more with each passing day 

All you truly need to do

Look deeply into these eyes of blue

And share the warmth of you

 

 

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Pour tus!
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Submitted by zarul on 22 July 2008 - 8:57am.
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impressive

its wonderful to read another love poem from u. but i thnk ur other poem is better (the poem which i said ill give to my wannabe-girlfren)

Submitted by poewriter58 on 22 July 2008 - 9:14am.
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Zarul

Now that is to cute thank you for reading , perhaps this one has a more specific meaning than the other and there in is the reason you related to the other better
thank you for reading and your comments
Chrystie

Submitted by Linda Moses on 22 July 2008 - 3:23pm.
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Chrys

I liked the flow of this. It is a sweet poem

Submitted by poewriter58 on 22 July 2008 - 4:00pm.
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Linda

Thank you so much
Chrys

Submitted by Rett on 22 July 2008 - 3:32pm.
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Very pretty

I would almost think you were a schoolgirl in love. You really have a knack for love poems Chrys. Makes me think about writing one.
Rett:
“A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on.” Winston Churchill

Submitted by poewriter58 on 22 July 2008 - 4:02pm.
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Rett

Now why would anyone ever think that
thanks
Chrystie

Submitted by DarkinAZ on 23 July 2008 - 7:07pm.
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HELLO!

Sorry kinda been busy, a little behind on my reading.

I really enjoyed this one, as always.

Sincerely,
Mark