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she was so lovely
he feared she would just vanish
then one day she did
some dreams come to life to prove
they are only dreams

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
I am grateful to Liliana Negoi, co-author of this poem.
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Submitted by Barbara Writes on 21 July 2008 - 5:47pm.
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very intriguing

Smiles:)
Barbara

Very nice well written

Submitted by Rob Graber on 22 July 2008 - 8:02am.
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Thanks!

Thanks!