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Submitted by
orgami on 7 July 2007 - 2:01am.
isnt it amazing
ill
worked so hard
its like life
in a jar
waiting for that
lid to spin
take a breath
feel the sky
naked as a thousand
lies
..O..
Tassle
Good title . Nice fast pace . Really liked this .
The theme appealed to me more than words could express excellent pinksheep
very
deep. good one orgami!