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So potent in fragility,
This fuzzy small gray globe
On the very verge of its dispersion
Poised—

The lightest breath
Of an uncommon astronomer:
So cordially were we invited all
To see the Cosmos in
A common dandelion seedball.

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
For the contest.
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Submitted by RSScheerer on 16 July 2008 - 12:28am.
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We had enough dandelions

out here to create an new universe! Stubborn things, too - won’t be mowed down without a couple of trips over them.

I like this piece, Rob. You’ve taken something commonplace and made your reader contemplate a greater depth.

Best,
~ Ronda

Submitted by Rob Graber on 16 July 2008 - 8:56am.
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Evolution by Lawn-Mower Selection?

I have the half-serious theory that dandelions are getting shorter and tougher-stemmed over the decades because taller, tender-stemmed ones are less likely to survive and reproduce in an environment full of threatening lawn mowers… Thanks!

Submitted by RSScheerer on 16 July 2008 - 3:43pm.
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I swear they duck when they

I swear they duck when they see me coming on the mower….
~ Ronda

Submitted by Rob Graber on 18 July 2008 - 9:13am.
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Selecting for Evasive Behavior??

Evasive behavior being selected for? THAT had not occurred to me! :-,?