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Threecrows-lg

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The Kingfisher’s Flight

A chittering fishcatcher’s dawn flight strung

Like crepe from shoreline tree to tree.

This flashing-mind-samadhi;

The first morning glimpse of sunlight is scattering

Shattered jewels like the light

I saw shimmering over

The gu’nels of a wooden Green River skiff

When I was young.

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A verbal image of a trans formative event.
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Submitted by RSScheerer on 15 July 2008 - 11:40pm.
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Verbal image

“Like crepe from shoreline tree to tree”

That’s just fantastic!

I liked this piece very much.

Best,
~ Ronda

Submitted by threecrows-lg on 18 July 2008 - 4:43pm.
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Thank you Ronda. A

Thank you Ronda. A kingfisher’s flight is very much like that; or so i thought at the time.
Your poem of Venus and valor is a wonderful expression of that most tragic of human frailties- self inflicted aggression. Your poem is a small act of acknowledgment eloquently presented. You do good work young lady.

Submitted by RSScheerer on 18 July 2008 - 5:09pm.
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Thank you for the kind words

Thank you for the kind words regarding my poem. I’m honored.
~ Ronda