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JANICE HERZOG
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Submitted by JANICE HERZOG on 3 July 2008 - 11:29am.
Style / Type:
freeform
I feel it when I undress
You make me powerless
Your sweet caress
Always feeling priceless
Motionless, relentless
For your sweet caress
Never feeling worthless
Or useless
From your sweet caress
Don’t stop trying to impress
I don’t want to be touchless
I need your sweet caress
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Please do not critique mechanics. The inconsistencies in style are intentional, or correcting them is not important to me.
I hope you like my poem
Another very beautiful love poem. *S*
And again I am charmed!
Rett:
The perfect summer day is when the sun is shining, the wind is blowing, the birds are singing and the lawnmower is broken. “James Dent”
Your Sweet Caress
Dear Rett: Thank-you for reading my poem. I’m glad you liked it. I am going ot the doctor’s office. He wants to test me to see if I had a stroke. He thinks it is either that or Post Traumatice Stress Disorder. I don’t know which one I prefer. Much Love, JAnice Herzog xoxo