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Submitted by GreenBean on Tue, 06/24/2008 - 19:59.
Just now a memorycaught my eye.Looking long,I gave a sigh. Without a thoughtI brought you near,to see if Icould maybe hear, your words again,with whispers sweet,like baby’s breathand angels feet. I close my eyesand we are there,enjoying life,without a care. I brush my handacross your face.Inhale a breathto smell that place, where once we playedwhen time stood still,and daisies grewon Green Grass Hill. I turn my gazeback down to youand everythingcomes back in view. The paper smilesin shades of black.I realizeI’m smiling back. An empty well…My eyes stay dry.(I can’t believeI didn’t cry.) I hang you upand walk away.My heart is whereyou’ll always stay.
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Submitted by GreenBean on Thu, 06/26/2008 - 22:02.

Thanks to everyone. I’ve

Thanks to everyone. This one was fun to write. I think we all have some childhood place that we frequented… that’s had a parking lot built upon it! Green Grass Hill was topsoil that sat for many years. Eventually it became someone’s front lawn. Peace! Kim (Green Bean)
Submitted by prayersbyPatty on Wed, 06/25/2008 - 04:15.

I enjoyed your poem

Simple and sweet, Hate to be a copycat but the third verse was my favorite also real good imagination. Angels feet….. a new thing that is sweet.Patty
Submitted by Janice Pearce on Wed, 06/25/2008 - 01:09.

Green Grass Hill

Grean Bean I really enjoyed this one nice easy verse brought me back to simpler days~
Submitted by DarkinAZ on Tue, 06/24/2008 - 22:35.

Loved it.

Look forward to more.Sincerely, Mark
Submitted by themoonman on Tue, 06/24/2008 - 21:52.

Hi GreenBean...

I too loved the flow and wording used… easy to read and left me with a smile reading your dedications. Richard
Submitted by purplemoondoll on Tue, 06/24/2008 - 20:46.

Interesting dedications :-).

Interesting dedications :-). I liked the rhythm and simple language used here. This read a little like a chant. I particualrly like the third verse.CheersKazIt’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.