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Submitted by hardshaft on 6 June 2008 - 9:16pm.| Updated 7 June 2008 - 12:48pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
You should always have goals,
Small or bold,
Opening page would be a coming of age….for a poem.
Not for me, but for it!
It wants to be short so you just find the room.
Like yesterdays , It will be forgotten by noon.
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Opening page
Smiles:)
Barbara
This is good I like it.
I can feel the emotion in your theme.
Really good flow
One minor suggestion. Did you meant (to) in your title?