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Jamatibag
Philippines
Submitted by jamatibag on 5 June 2008 - 11:59pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
true beauty lies within
something in people that is rarely seen
beauty is giving a helping hand
to all people even if they are as plentiful as sand
remember that beauty outside doesn’t matter
it’s the beauty inside that always matters!
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It is really, really hard to be original
or avoid being trite when writing inspirational poetry, jamatibag. I notice your favourite poet is Shakespeare. He never wrote an inspirational poem, yet his poetry can be awesomely inspirational.
Would love to see some of your more personal work.
cheers,
Jess
thanks!!
thanks for the comment!! well, however hard it is to be original, we must still strive to be one!!
thanks again!
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Welcome to the site. Like Jess I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Kaz
It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.