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Jamatibag

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philippines, oriental mindoro,
Philippines

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true beauty lies within
something in people that is rarely seen
beauty is giving a helping hand
to all people even if they are as plentiful as sand

remember that beauty outside doesn’t matter
it’s the beauty inside that always matters!

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if ever someone insults you about your looks and you feel bad about it, read this!!!
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Submitted by weirdelf on 6 June 2008 - 2:58am.
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It is really, really hard to be original

or avoid being trite when writing inspirational poetry, jamatibag. I notice your favourite poet is Shakespeare. He never wrote an inspirational poem, yet his poetry can be awesomely inspirational.
Would love to see some of your more personal work.
cheers,
Jess

Submitted by jamatibag on 13 June 2008 - 2:51am.

thanks!!

thanks for the comment!! well, however hard it is to be original, we must still strive to be one!!

thanks again!

Submitted by purplemoondoll on 6 June 2008 - 6:23pm.
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Welcome to the site. Like

Welcome to the site. Like Jess I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Kaz

It’s impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.