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JANICE HERZOG
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Submitted by JANICE HERZOG on 13 May 2008 - 11:44am.| Updated 21 May 2008 - 4:17pm.
Style / Type:
freeform
Do you want more of me?
Please don’t make me wait to see
What our destiny might be
Could it be amore?
Just you and me
Together forever until eternity
Faithfully, amore
The way you make me
Want to be free
Should be, maybe?
Amore, sweet, amore
Why not, you and me?
Loyally, lovingly, eternally
Giving you all of me
Amore, precious, amore
I want so much to be
Your one and only
To never again be lonely
With or without me
Which will it be?
Amore, hot, amore
I want you to want me
All of me, to need me
Possibly love me?
One day, amore
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Please do not critique mechanics. The inconsistencies in style are intentional, or correcting them is not important to me.
I hope you like my poem. p.s. look everybody all of my poems are now in lower case. i didn't know that you people didn't like all caps. so sorry janice
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I do like this poem. Its
I do like this poem. Its realy nice.
Xenia, was that comment cruel or dippy??
I think JANICE is doing something here..
cheers,
Jess
amore
Dear xenia: thank-you for reading my poetry. i am switching to lower case tomorrow. all of my poetry is base on love. i believe that love conquers all. i am 43 years old. i just started writng poetry in march 2008. i have one daughter kristen who is 19, and a new granddaughter genevieve who was just born may1 2008. keep reading. sincerely janice herzog
Hello
This poem would make good song lyrics. Wishing you a belated welcome to the site.
Always, Cat
amore
dear cat: thank-you for reading my poem. i only started writng poetry in march 2008. all of my poems are about love. i believe that love conquers all. i am 43 years old. i have a child kristen who is 19, and a new granddaughter genevieve who was born may 1, 2008. i am changing to lower case tomorrow. sincerely, janice herzog