Jade had been telling me you wrote poetry and I didnt realise it was your poem when I commented on it … LOL I am still in shock, naughty girl should have given me the heads up lol(Btw I think the world of your girl shes a treasure) I regard her as family …
Its so lovely to see you here, more aussies !! and if theres anything I can do to help dont hesitate to ask … Welcome to Neopoet and nice to meet you… Love and hugz Jayne x x

“We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves.
Lynn Hall” …

hey lyz thank you so much for commenting on my poem. its a huge relief to hear that someone appreciates my work for what it is. All the comments on my other pieces basically say good start. So thank you so much

Thanks for your comments Lyz..

thanks for the comment. hope you enjoyed it.

matt

Whenever your down or blue come here and read my little gift to you , your a wonderful friend and an awesome poet … thanks for everything I thought it was time you had your poem on your profile lol love and bug hugs Jayne x x x x

For Lyz ….

You charm the petals
that grace the bloom,
smoke stops its steep
as your walk hits the room

In a single breath
you glisten the stars,
laying a claim
from venus to mars

A butterflies touch
that heals the mind,
words and phrases
that flow sublime

A Truth of beauty
from the mother,
a voice for many
no man can smother

Searching the sky
her face tilts the sun,
lighting the world
our beacon of one

Fighting with right
by her side,
making her way
through thought in rhyme

A saffron wake
she leaves behind,
to follow her message
merging heart into mind

A Comfort in words
the jarring ones too,
she makes my day
this is never more true

Original Sin -
She swallowed the pips
And spat out the flesh

It was meant to be a little joke. I would very much like to be buddies with you as I admire your work too. Hope to hear from you, Dalton X.

I’m glad you like the poem. It makes me want to write more. Dalton X.

Original sin is the planting of that first nasty … you know whatsit lol

sorry Lyz I came to cheer you up and laughed at Daltons comment and was being naughty ok spank me and put me to bed NOTTTT lmao ;)

love and biggest hugs Jayne x x

Thankx for reading, and even liking my poems. Stay on line because it’s fun. Dalton.

To Dear Mum You Smell!

hahaha kidding love you :)

Bjs coming home with me this friday too

ill ttyl :)

love your awesomely fave daughter! haha

And where the hell is a poem woman? I have been to this page everyday for the last week waiting for you to post … get ya finger out lmao .. OoOooO i can feel I am going to pay for that one … he he he

love and hugs Jayne x x

still laughing at all the mad bastards in those comments above lmao

What if I like my finger, oops. Lol.
No I have been busy in thought of a few things I gotta deal with and just I suppose, in the dumps again. Bad back, now gone, tooth, still a bitch, my first night at home while kel went bush was taken over by a fever, later found to be food poisoning from one small piece of meat, no wonder I dont eat it much. I could keep going but I can hear you laughing and I am sure my jigsaw puzzle should be near finished, lol.
Theres worse off than me and my exciting boring days of woe, fuck, if I could, I would, rave all day lately, but I am getting back to my jolly, god what a word, self just as sure as your spark has returned, mine will too.
Long answer to your question, lol.
Now get that hugs from me to you from Jade before she leaves and say to her, you smell, Ha, Ha.
Lyz. XX

Hey thanks for the add, i love your poetry!

I am definitely enjoying this site and have got some great advice! I was so happy to find a place with experienced writers, who are also great people to submit my poems. :)

Thanks for adding me… I love your poem and continue to read the others as well… hopefully I read other poet’s work too.. and the connection I’ve found here is like…a new poem in mind, but I’ll be posting it tomorrow since I just post one earlier… Again, THANKS! …more poetry!

Ann of Norway

Lyzabel my Isobel,
my Elizabeth,
where are you Tinkerbell?
We seek you here,
we seek you there
and all we find is empty air,
we know you’re one who can fly,
where have you flown,
what wind has blown you far away from here?
We fear for you,
we wonder,
we wish you well and all your family too,
so do tell us where you are, do!

Sweet friend do let us know?
Love from Ann.

..that’s so lovely Ms. Ann Harvey! :)
Where are you Ms. Lyz, you are truly being missed..