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Favorite Quote“Do not lead me into temptation, I can find my own way. ” |
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| Favorite Poets | Helene Steiner Rice, E.Poe. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Greatest Influence | You, all I meet, life and people in general. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
| About me | Married, 2 lovely children, boy and a girl, soon to be a nan. Woohoo. Cant wait. More another day, lol. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Dear Lyz
Jade had been telling me you wrote poetry and I didnt realise it was your poem when I commented on it … LOL I am still in shock, naughty girl should have given me the heads up lol(Btw I think the world of your girl shes a treasure) I regard her as family …
Its so lovely to see you here, more aussies !! and if theres anything I can do to help dont hesitate to ask … Welcome to Neopoet and nice to meet you… Love and hugz Jayne x x
“We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves.
Lynn Hall” …
Hi
Don’t worry about commenting back, I just realized these were here. Hi, yes I am Jades mum, and you are Trent’s mum. I am a little bored so I thought I would sticky beak around until Dr who comes on. Lol.
Lovely to meet u.
Bye from me. x
hey
hey lyz thank you so much for commenting on my poem. its a huge relief to hear that someone appreciates my work for what it is. All the comments on my other pieces basically say good start. So thank you so much
Hi again
I love your work and I am glad u appreciate me commenting.
Love from Lyz. XX
Death in Saskatchewan
Thanks for your comments Lyz..
Hi
Sorry I never replied this, I only came across it now.Well all I can say is my pleasure and hopefully I get to read more of your work.
Love Lyz. X
thanks
thanks for the comment. hope you enjoyed it.
matt
Dear Matt
Welcome and yes I did enjoy it. I like dark writes but I also hope it does not pertain too much to the writer. I hope you have a great time here and grace us with more of your work. Thank u.
Love lyz. XX
Dearest Lyz
Whenever your down or blue come here and read my little gift to you , your a wonderful friend and an awesome poet … thanks for everything I thought it was time you had your poem on your profile lol love and bug hugs Jayne x x x x
For Lyz ….
You charm the petals
that grace the bloom,
smoke stops its steep
as your walk hits the room
In a single breath
you glisten the stars,
laying a claim
from venus to mars
A butterflies touch
that heals the mind,
words and phrases
that flow sublime
A Truth of beauty
from the mother,
a voice for many
no man can smother
Searching the sky
her face tilts the sun,
lighting the world
our beacon of one
Fighting with right
by her side,
making her way
through thought in rhyme
A saffron wake
she leaves behind,
to follow her message
merging heart into mind
A Comfort in words
the jarring ones too,
she makes my day
this is never more true
So sweet
is this poem from you to me and when u are here, I will bring it over and u can autograph it for me. Thank you my dear. It is beautiful and from a friend like you, it is more than a gift.
True heart, thank u and to to u and yours,
all our love.
Love from Lyz. XX
Isnt this poem
BEAUTIFUL
BEAUTIFUL
BEAUTIFUL.
Dalton
Original Sin -
She swallowed the pips
And spat out the flesh
Dear Dalton
My dear man, forgive me if I am lost on this comment, I do not know what it pertains to.
I have to say though, I like these words. Lol.
You will have to fill me in.
Love to you and yours,
Lyz, XX
Sorry Lyz
It was meant to be a little joke. I would very much like to be buddies with you as I admire your work too. Hope to hear from you, Dalton X.
Dear Dalton
Sorry so long in replying.
I am a nan tomorrow, yay.
I will be back at Neo soo mate.
Love to you and yours.
XX
Dalton to Lyz
I’m glad you like the poem. It makes me want to write more. Dalton X.
Lol
Been a while so I will have to recheck all your work again, not sure which poem you are talking about but a little more patience and I will soon know.
Love all.
XX
Original sin is the planting
Original sin is the planting of that first nasty … you know whatsit lol
sorry Lyz I came to cheer you up and laughed at Daltons comment and was being naughty ok spank me and put me to bed NOTTTT lmao ;)
love and biggest hugs Jayne x x
I am glad you are smiling
You are still the character, lol, Dalton put that on when I wrote about Jade, lol.
As for the spanking, I will leave that up to Snake you kinky girl, lol.
Love ya Lyz. XX
Dear Lyz
Thankx for reading, and even liking my poems. Stay on line because it’s fun. Dalton.
Hey dear Dalton
I am not going anywhere as yet, lol, and yes, it is fun.
Love to you and yours.
I will be catching up later.
Lyz, Xx
To Dear Mum You Smell!hahaha
To Dear Mum You Smell!
hahaha kidding love you :)
Bjs coming home with me this friday too
ill ttyl :)
love your awesomely fave daughter! haha
Hey there switch
Well my baby girl, see you both on Friday. Hope you gotta key, we may be at Gaynors to see Emma for her birthday. And you smell, ha, ha, so there. Say happy birthday from us to BJs mum and Jayne sends her hugs. And by the way, you have to be my fave daughter, I only have one, Spade, so see you Friday. Will I keep you both dinner or what?
Love yas and bye,
from your mummy.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXX
And where the hell is a poem
And where the hell is a poem woman? I have been to this page everyday for the last week waiting for you to post … get ya finger out lmao .. OoOooO i can feel I am going to pay for that one … he he he
love and hugs Jayne x x
still laughing at all the mad bastards in those comments above lmao
Hey
What if I like my finger, oops. Lol.
No I have been busy in thought of a few things I gotta deal with and just I suppose, in the dumps again. Bad back, now gone, tooth, still a bitch, my first night at home while kel went bush was taken over by a fever, later found to be food poisoning from one small piece of meat, no wonder I dont eat it much. I could keep going but I can hear you laughing and I am sure my jigsaw puzzle should be near finished, lol.
Theres worse off than me and my exciting boring days of woe, fuck, if I could, I would, rave all day lately, but I am getting back to my jolly, god what a word, self just as sure as your spark has returned, mine will too.
Long answer to your question, lol.
Now get that hugs from me to you from Jade before she leaves and say to her, you smell, Ha, Ha.
Lyz. XX
Lyz
Hey thanks for the add, i love your poetry!
Hi
Thank you. I hope I can get time each day from here on in to catch up and get to read as much as I can. As well as getting to read new work done by all you fine poets.
Love to you and yours,
From me and mine.
Heres wishing you all the best for this year and more.
Lyz,
XX
Awesome
I am definitely enjoying this site and have got some great advice! I was so happy to find a place with experienced writers, who are also great people to submit my poems. :)
Hi
I am glad you are enjoying, writing soothes the soul, I reckon. lol.
You keep on smiling and writing.
Lyz.
Xx
Lyz
Thanks for adding me… I love your poem and continue to read the others as well… hopefully I read other poet’s work too.. and the connection I’ve found here is like…a new poem in mind, but I’ll be posting it tomorrow since I just post one earlier… Again, THANKS! …more poetry!
Dear 97
no need to thank, I will be around in a couple of days and I will have a read if I may, of your work. At the mo, busy. Take care and thank you.
Lyz.
XX
Where are you Tinkerbell?
Ann of Norway
Lyzabel my Isobel,
my Elizabeth,
where are you Tinkerbell?
We seek you here,
we seek you there
and all we find is empty air,
we know you’re one who can fly,
where have you flown,
what wind has blown you far away from here?
We fear for you,
we wonder,
we wish you well and all your family too,
so do tell us where you are, do!
Sweet friend do let us know?
Love from Ann.
AWWW SO SWEET
I smile threefold dear Ann with the heart of gold. I wish I was Tinkerbell, I would grant you all wishes, lol.
Love the poem, your new pic, your sweetheart and you.
A big thank you and a lot of fairy dust wishes to you and yours. I will treasure this. as you know by now, all is going fine. Thank you.
Love Lyz.
XX
..that’s so lovely Ms. Ann
..that’s so lovely Ms. Ann Harvey! :)
Where are you Ms. Lyz, you are truly being missed..
Hello my friend
Yes, isn’t it beautiful, Ann is a wonderful woman and as for you, thank you too and all is fine. I really do love your pic and I am glad you have perfumed my page with such a glorious flower. Is it an Orchid?
Love it any way.
Thanks again, Love Lyz.
XX
..yup, it’s an orchid just
..yup, it’s an orchid just don’t know its scientific name..LOL! glad you like it, and i’m more happy that your back! :)
Thank you
Nice to hear from you. After tomorrow, hopefully, you may get sick of me, lol.
Love to all.
XX
Good to see your back huni
Good to see your back huni lol hugs
love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe
p.s i gotta ring you in the next couple of days I have news
Avatar, beautiful
Heya hun.
Not back yet. After Jade and my stuff, I will fully be boring the crap outta all of you.
Soon.
Love me, lol.
Very soon.
XX
Dearest Lyz
If I pout and sulk a little will it get you to post? lmao I am in a cheeky mood today sorry … but i will if it will work lmfao ~! haha love to all JayCee x x x
(“Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin”)
Hahaha! Yes, cheeky, lol.
Told ya soon.
No, no poems. Too damn busy I am aching, lol.
I will chat soon.
Love to all.
XX
friendship is the tonic of life.
lyz,
thank you so much for adding me to you friend list, this i consider a very generous offer and i thank you so much for it, i will be my best to meet up this kindness. thank you,
much love and respect to you.
chumfin
Hi Dear One
Thank you.
I am eager to get back and when I do I will be looking you up, lol.
Soon my friend.
Love to all.
XX
Hello Lyz...
nice to know that you signed me on your buddy list…it’s my pleasure and privilege to be there…look forward to reding more of yours…
wishing you smiles..
warmly…raj (sublime_ocean)..
Dear Raj
I am on my way back so be patient and I will be on your page very soon.
I too wish you lots of smile and love.
XX
Dear Nana
just finished talking to BJ, letting you know we are coming down with his dad on Tuesday …. hahahahaha funny time to meet you but yeah what better time when bubs is born lol … we are all excited as hell I bet your a dither getting everything ready … give her a big hug and tell her we will see her after its all over lol
love you huni big smile JayCee x x x
(“Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin”)
Aha, here you are lovely girl.
I just finished talking to BJ too, saying bye to him, Jade and Kelvin. All gone to the hospital, my baby is going to be a mummy and me a nanny and you an aunty, WOOTWOO.
Car seat in and off they went. They are inserting the balloon tonight then in the morning, breaking her waters and hooking her up then away we go. So Lil-Storm will be here on Tuesday the 8th. And yes, it will be great to finally give you a big hug. As for dither, that is an understatement, lol, I am still going, havent started on my housework yet, a complete brothel, lol, Hood would be appalled, lol. Well darling, now I am on, it is like a quick fix, but alas, I must dis my friends to go back to the drudgery of preparation cleaning washing ironing, thats without the floors. All wood except Lillian-Storm’s room, and with the downpours we have had, has not made drying any easier. Safe trip you guys and take care, love to you all and thanks.
Love all.
XX
Dearest Nana
:) I just got off the phone to Matty he said to wish them both luck and I gotta let them know soon as shes born lol … I am going to get the house tidied up and pack a bag in case we get a call and have to leave in the middle of the night … we both going to be tired and messy tomorrow night … Nana I think we should wet the babies head tomorrow lol just one or two lol and make sure we get in first ;) see you later tonight online I know your not going to sleep neither am I lol I keep thinking the phones going to ring and I am going to have to run round like a mad woman getting ready … Bj sent me a few texts, how excited is he ?lol how excited are we all lmao ;)
just think this time tomorrow night we going to have a new member of the family … I know I am going to cry lol … dont you over do it and do too much and make sure you get some rest huni … and try not to worry OK OK OK ~! its all going be apples chief ;)
love you see you sometime tonight or tomorrow
love and biggest hugs Jayne lol
P.S OI if you dont rest i will find out I’ll ask kelvin lol and i will be all over you like a rash woman and dont stress ok ??? its all going to be fine ;) I got faith enough for both of us( I know you got your own but you can never have too much lol)
(“A baby will make love stronger, days shorter, nights longer, bankroll smaller, home happier, clothes shabbier, the past forgotten, and the future worth living for”)
Hey babe
So so sorry I did not get to reply.
But thank u and I will be on my toes from now on.
Love to you and the family.
Say thanks to all for me please.
XX
Lyz.
Dear Nana
How goes you and the girls ?? Smile … I will be down there next week was wondering if I could call in and leave some presents for Lil Storm PM me woman lol
love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x
(Quote~~”It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. “–Charles Baudelaire)
HE HE
I am slack hey. Anytime you are always welcome here but at the mo the girls are your end, lol.
Love ya! I am so mind ashed at the mo I am trying to get it together so first on the agenda is make sure I keep up with comments, lol.
Love to you all and enjoy your visit, and I am still waiting for mine, lol.
Luv to the guys.
XX