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Submitted by orgami on 23 September 2008 - 11:48pm.
capture of the monotone
sweet heavens breath
on statics telephone
talk talk your tears
my baby love
just darkness fears
in chromatic wanting
the desolate barking
in distant hurting
i want to be there
with you
touch all that gleams
within
with our hesitant
plans
begin
i can hear you breathing
slowly
know your tears are
cresting
in your sad eyes like
the stars are burning
in heavens shelter
while the storm of
quiet darkness
comes knocking to
my night
and happenstance
fill the tumbler
with hot chance
turn the chamber
for romance
talk talk you tears
my baby love
just darkness fears
in chromatic wanting
the barrel flaunting
the hour so haunting
Nice
Hope to see this one on the main stream soon, so I can vote appropriately. There is a lot of sadness behind this one, and is not your normal style - still beautiful, though.
~Jess K.
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