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Submitted by Christa23 on 14 September 2008 - 5:00am.
Hand entangled round your throat
Slowly starts its squeezing
Uncaring hand at your chest
Unwanted disruption to your breathing
In, Out, In In In
Grasp is getting tighter
Hand is searching for a way
To make the body lighter.
Races round your inner being
Causing havoc as it passes
Rounds up heavy weight of damp
To ascend before it crashes
Through blurred eyes and down pained face
A trickle then the warning thunder
Sounds aloud a change of pace
As hand rips suspended nerves asunder
Rolling tumbling hazardous waters
Churning deep below the obvious
Rapidly trickle turns to flood
As strangled emotions become tumultuous.
Merciless drops demandingly fall
Heedless of the sudden touch
Of the palm that reaches angrily up to
Rid themselves of the likes of such
Repulsive tears being surrendered from
A mass of sore and heaving heart
Unwanted torrent pushing relentlessly
Threatening to tear peace apart.
Havoc reigns supreme as flood waters journey
Through heaving chest and swollen eyes
No let up from the sudden onslaught
Until hand chooses its grip to realise
And reluctantly it releases, its absolute hold
Uncaringly tiring of its sudden brief reign
And exhausted heart lays emotionlessly empty,
As the storms calm eye brings a dull relief from pain.
nice ranting emotion
I , personally would be a bigger fan of this if I had heard it…
the emotion comes across well.
its all broken for its being..,
I love the piece and hope you continue writing verse…