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I am lying on the floor dizzy, and really can’t tell you why;
I see stars in front of me but they are not up in the sky;
I was having a great day, talking to my wife;
We was talking about our love and our great life;

She ask me about my health, she ask me about my work
She ask me about my sister, and my brother-in-law the jerk.
She ask me about my father, she ask me about my mother.
She ask me about my Aunt, she ask me about my brother;
She ask me to mow the lawn, she ask me to take out the trash;
She ask me to look at her arm, because she has some rash;
She ask me about her hair, she ask me about her shoe;
She ask me if her pants made her look fat, and I said, Yes you bet they do.

So I am lying on the floor wondering who I am;
Next to me on the floor is a Frying Pan

 

 Martin D. White
Author
Living The Simple Life
Simple Life Poetry
www.livingthesimplelife.com
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Publisher- Poetic Monthly
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Submitted by Perfectly Imperfect on 8 September 2008 - 11:24am.

Good Job!

Well that was interesting to say the least! Very funny, i liked it a lot, its not often you find a writer that can sucessfully create something humorous! Nice work :)

Submitted by Infinite_Dwarf on 13 September 2008 - 12:29pm.
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LOL!!!

I knew it, I knew it, I knew it!!! Was just waiting to see what the triggering question was. Welcome to Neo.

~Jess
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“Live every day as if it were your last; one day you’ll be right….”

Submitted by themoonman on 13 September 2008 - 4:25pm.
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lol...

very funny… standard answer is .. you look beautiful Honey… but we all
forget that sometime…

Richard

Submitted by Martin White on 13 September 2008 - 5:53pm.
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Thank you for the nice

Thank you for the nice comments this was a fun one to write.