Is poetry intwined in your chromosones?
I think I was born a little too late, darnit!

certianly
this poem that means nothing to you
is about a thunderstorm that
rolled through late one night
that my girlfreind and i watched
from the end or our sidewalk in
this city

the description is about thunder
and the lightening “white chains”

perhaps sometimes i simply over-word
my descriptions

so its all in a matter of working
on this

thank you for your perspective
connect11

Orgami

is one of the best I´ve ever read! Something that often crossed my mind…Ink Dragon

the comments here are rich insights
gold from the depths
amber on the shore after a big storm

I appreciate your words greatly

thank you

“Not since the Houston Asylum Fire of ‘54 have I seen so many flaming crazies.” ~Dan Rather, SNL Fringe Candidates Debate

Maybe out of place, but your quote reminded me of the old Joke of the Priest and the Cab driver at the pearly gates. The Priest is handed an old robe, sandles and a tarnished halo by St. Peter and the Cab driver got a brand new robe, sandles and bright shiny halo. The priest was a bit upset and says “Why do I get the worn out stuff and he gets brand new?” St. Peter replies, “Because, when you held a sermon, people went to sleep, but when he drove, people prayed!”

Sorry, probably older than I am. Anyway, thought I’d pop by and return the favor of comments and check out some of your poetry.

Respectfully,
Rett:
“Next time you think you’re perfect, walk on water.”

awesome! hehe nice playlist!

<3 Emarie

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‘My prayer is a rapture in blue’ - The Ink Spots ‘My Prayer’ 1939

and I owe it all to you! 10,000 Maniacs were my favorite band throughout my late teen and young adult years.

Mark W.

“our hope is in the living God, who is the Savior of all people and particularly of all believers.” 1 Timothy 4:10