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Christmas -ish. Haiku -ish.
A coddling of eggs,
emptying of Santas sack,
an old bird well stuffed.
Obi.
Last few words:
take care now I'm sensitive ! ish.
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Wed, 2021-11-24 14:57
About as...
sensitive as the warts on Old Scrooge's ass! I see an elderly couple, having a break, after all their hard work! LoL
Geez.
.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Obadiah Grey
Wed, 2021-11-24 16:01
I can see I'm gonna have to
I can see I'm gonna have to school you on the use of proper "Englund" ish, Gee.
An "ASS", is a beast of burden one would laden and depend on to deliver ones possessions to, wherever !
Whereas, an "ARSE", is more functional and relieves said burden from whomever.
Winky eye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Obi.
Geezer
Wed, 2021-11-24 18:17
Excuse me...
I meant arse! Still good work!
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
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lovedly
Wed, 2021-11-24 21:11
nice
obyish